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7 words by ~louisanna6:iconlouisanna6:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Here I feel alive.
My youthful curiosity flourishes.
Waves of love calm me until I feel safe.
I relish in the lovely green surroundings as my youthful innocence entices me to dream.
Uninhibited, draped in safety, filled with love, surrounded by calm, I let my curiosity contemplate the green grass.
The little green blades love their home, for they too are alive, for they too breath calmness, they too feel safe, and I dare to dream they too are curious.
Perhaps they feel my youthful love and in their sense of calm safety, they too are curious; perhaps they dream how I, so alive, am not so green.
©2009 ~louisanna6
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Author's Comments

Written for English. We were told to think of some place relating to nature and pick 7 words that we thought of relating to this place. Then each sentence had to use one more of the words than the last. So the first sentence uses one of them, the next uses two of them, and so on.

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~cyran073 Nov 8, 2009, 10:13:04 PM
This is nice. I particularly like your last phrase.
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~louisanna6 Nov 9, 2009, 8:38:27 AM
Thanks :)

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